Wow the ending is surprising!!!
I mean the ending for Signal is kind of predictable
but the ending for the supposed-to-be leading villain Noir !? I did not see it coming lol
And the plot twist for Pitch/Pirouz !? Gotta say … it’s the unpredictable yet hilarious plot twist so far !! And in a good way for me lol
😝
I don’t know … I just found that there is something comedy about this villain Pirouz when he first showed up 😂
And I do really like this new character setting for this villain vampire 🧛♀️ hope he enjoy all the criminals in Cindra City …occasionally with some hunky heroes lol
And I also believe that it can be a new way/perspective in your new storyline like: villain fight/against villain
I mean some villains you created are smoking hot too 🥵
I know that Nox you might think that this short story may not receive much attention/feedback as you expected
But for me it’s good short story as others
It’s good to see story focused and introduce more info about hero Singal
And bring back the familiar heroes like Wits and Phantom along with the journey
If there is something to complain about this short story , probably this short story is not that “shot” 😂
Well… after all, I still quite enjoy this one with Signal and Vampire 🧛♀️
And can’t wait for the Book 4, really want to see how it goes with our Rustmore Heroes and the ending for our yellow eyed King 👑
Ohhh, thank you for such a long and detailed comment and kind compliments! It was supposed to be a short story of about 3 chapters but when it comes to collaboration, things started to expand more over time leading to more and more ideas coming into the mix.
I’m glad you enjoy Pitch as a villain and an “honorary hero”. It’s still questionable at this point what exactly Pitch wants. He has such an erratic personality and motivation. And yes! Time to get to our Rustmore Arc!
Just come to mind about this recap on current status of Cindra heroes:
Top 5 :
True Blue > trapped in crystal
Ember man > corrupted, turn Gay and into BDSM
Velocity > Body damaged, turn into never-ending cum shooting cow
Wits > traumatized but normal, in love with Phantom
Phantom> traumatized but normal, in love with Wits
Communication team leader :
Signal > corrupted, turn to Gay and into Mind vampire
Young heroes squad :
The Unbreakable > infiltrated by a villain mole, some traumatized by pain torture
Well… let’s see how new Cindra heroes will be doing lol 😂
Felipe
2 years ago
ok, vampires are not my favs, but hey! this story was super hot … and i really love all the plot and character development … thanks for working on such amazing story! ☆
Last edited 2 years ago by Felipe
Axel
3 months ago
This was a story I should have read long ago along with so many others! What first drew me was the model picked for Nior. Hes such a hot man and I follow him on Instagram that I knew i had to read this story and I was not disappointed.. well Kind of haha. The story was Hot! Loved the use of smoke and cream as a mind hazing aphrodisiac. Loved the straight to Gay conversion of Signal. Damn Pitch for turning on Nior like that and making him a slave but it still looks like Signal is still hooked for his Master who is a slave. Come on Signal get your master back on top! 😜 Thank you both for writing a hot story. It was a pleasure to read and I binged all 7 parts in a short amount of time because I needed to read what happened next.
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Wow the ending is surprising!!!
I mean the ending for Signal is kind of predictable
but the ending for the supposed-to-be leading villain Noir !? I did not see it coming lol
And the plot twist for Pitch/Pirouz !? Gotta say … it’s the unpredictable yet hilarious plot twist so far !! And in a good way for me lol
😝
I don’t know … I just found that there is something comedy about this villain Pirouz when he first showed up 😂
And I do really like this new character setting for this villain vampire 🧛♀️ hope he enjoy all the criminals in Cindra City …occasionally with some hunky heroes lol
And I also believe that it can be a new way/perspective in your new storyline like: villain fight/against villain
I mean some villains you created are smoking hot too 🥵
I know that Nox you might think that this short story may not receive much attention/feedback as you expected
But for me it’s good short story as others
It’s good to see story focused and introduce more info about hero Singal
And bring back the familiar heroes like Wits and Phantom along with the journey
If there is something to complain about this short story , probably this short story is not that “shot” 😂
Well… after all, I still quite enjoy this one with Signal and Vampire 🧛♀️
And can’t wait for the Book 4, really want to see how it goes with our Rustmore Heroes and the ending for our yellow eyed King 👑
Bon continuation👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
Ohhh, thank you for such a long and detailed comment and kind compliments! It was supposed to be a short story of about 3 chapters but when it comes to collaboration, things started to expand more over time leading to more and more ideas coming into the mix.
I’m glad you enjoy Pitch as a villain and an “honorary hero”. It’s still questionable at this point what exactly Pitch wants. He has such an erratic personality and motivation. And yes! Time to get to our Rustmore Arc!
Oh forget to note this :
Signal can join now the ditch-woman-for-cock Club along with Renegade lol 😂
Wow I did not see that coming.
I kinda feel sorry for Noir now lol.
My favorite part was when Sig was being pressed against the window.
Fantasizing that Noir wiped the window with him until he jizzed
And that there was indeed an audience passing by outside the castle.
Just come to mind about this recap on current status of Cindra heroes:
Top 5 :
True Blue > trapped in crystal
Ember man > corrupted, turn Gay and into BDSM
Velocity > Body damaged, turn into never-ending cum shooting cow
Wits > traumatized but normal, in love with Phantom
Phantom> traumatized but normal, in love with Wits
Communication team leader :
Signal > corrupted, turn to Gay and into Mind vampire
Young heroes squad :
The Unbreakable > infiltrated by a villain mole, some traumatized by pain torture
Well… let’s see how new Cindra heroes will be doing lol 😂
ok, vampires are not my favs, but hey! this story was super hot … and i really love all the plot and character development … thanks for working on such amazing story! ☆
This was a story I should have read long ago along with so many others! What first drew me was the model picked for Nior. Hes such a hot man and I follow him on Instagram that I knew i had to read this story and I was not disappointed.. well Kind of haha. The story was Hot! Loved the use of smoke and cream as a mind hazing aphrodisiac. Loved the straight to Gay conversion of Signal. Damn Pitch for turning on Nior like that and making him a slave but it still looks like Signal is still hooked for his Master who is a slave. Come on Signal get your master back on top! 😜 Thank you both for writing a hot story. It was a pleasure to read and I binged all 7 parts in a short amount of time because I needed to read what happened next.